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Wednesday, 17 August 2016

Remembering poem

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  1. Anonymous17 August 2016 at 11:53

    I like how you put skidding

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  2. Anonymous17 August 2016 at 11:53

    I like how you put skidding

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  3. Jayden12 October 2016 at 11:56

    Hi Jayden here at Awahono School.I like how you used interesting words in your poem. I also like how you used descriptive words in your poem and described your senses. Maybe next time you could add a bit more detail.If you added more writing to your poem what would you add to your poem? If you want to visit my blog click on the link hope to hear from you again.
    Jayden

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