Hi Jayden here at Awahono School. I liked how you used descriptive words in your poem.I also liked how you described your senses.Maybe next time you could try to make your poem a bit longer. Your poem reminds me of when I unwrapped my Christmas presents. What other presents would you have instead?If you want to you visit my blog click on the link hope to hear from you.
Hi Jayden here at Awahono School. I liked how you used descriptive words in your poem.I also liked how you described your senses.Maybe next time you could try to make your poem a bit longer. Your poem reminds me of when I unwrapped my Christmas presents. What other presents would you have instead?If you want to you visit my blog click on the link hope to hear from you.
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